Last quarter I received a perfect cold email. It followed the same simple prospecting framework I teach. Here's a line-by-line breakdown of why it works so well: SUBJECT LINE: Make it all about them and reference your research Why it works: Shows that it's not spam or automated, and creates curiosity to open the e-mail and here what they have to say PARAGRAPH #1: Warm, personal, with a sincere compliment Why it works: Shows the prospect you took the time to learn about them, and humanizes you. PARAGRAPH #2: Share relevant observations based on research and a potential problem which their research uncovered Why it works: Shows that you are reaching out to identify a potential way to help them which they may not be thinking about PARAGRAPH #3: Shares specific, clear value proposition which includes the problem you solve and the outcomes you deliver Why it works: people need to clearly understand what you do so they can decide for themselves if it makes sense to meet with you. Sharing generic outcomes without being direct or specific confuses and annoys prospects because they still don't know what you do after reading the e-mail. PARAGRAPH #4: Soft Call to Interest (CTI): Ask if they have ever given thought to what you wrote, and if they're open to discussing further. Why it works: Never assume that a prospect needs what you are selling. Instead, confirm whether they've thought about the problem you solve and are open to discussing further. A call to interest (CTI) is much softer than a call to action (CTA), such as asking them to meet before you've confirmed they even have a need or interest. Don't assume anything, just ask and validate first. Kudos to the seller for sending a well-written, thoughtful e-mail.
Great breakdown! Personalisation and clear value are indeed game-changers in email outreach. Thanks for sharing these insights!
So when does the book come out?
This is great - well written, clear and concise, and easy to read quickly....and no corny sales pitch!!!!
Ain’t no way AI wrote that…good stuff!
who is this person?
That’s a great email Ian Koniak
99% of people miss out on the first paragraph. If it's not personal, it gets deleted. Great example Ian Koniak
Awesome first email! Curious, if you don't get a response to the first email you send, what is the best approach for a follow up email? I mean e.g. more info share on pain? simple "did you consider this?" or something else?
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1yMade me stop and think… “wait a minute, why HASN’T Ian published a book yet?!” Great email.