
Writer and Screenplay Consultant, Story Sense
Greater Los Angeles Area

Writer and Screenplay Consultant, Story Sense
Greater Los Angeles Area
Screenwriter with more than 50 hours of credits in prime-time television. Script doctor and ghost writer on many independent features. Story editor for factual series, coordinating the work of writer-producers to achieve a consistent look. Supervisor of video editing, with training on Avid systems.
Founder of Story Sense script analysis services. Screenplay consultant to writers, producers, and directors, with more than 30 years' experience creating successful screenplays. Background includes story analysis for seven major studios. Contributed to the development of such films as "Lethal Weapon," "The Prince of Tides," "Contact," "Braveheart," and many more.
Writing reenactments, evaluating independent films for acquisition, helping writers and producers develop scripts to get a "green light." Finding the dramatic heart in a mountain of research, developing flesh-and-blood characters, and crafting the narrative to build a sense of jeopardy. Specialist in crime and medical stories.
(Sole Proprietorship; Myself Only; Motion Pictures and Film industry)
November 1999 — Present (10 years 1 month)
Founded and managed a top, internationally recognized screenplay analysis service. Wrote script coverage, development notes, and selling synopses for writers, directors, and producers.
• Star speaker at the annual Screenwriting Expo and author of a popular DVD on story structure.
• “Highly Recommended” by Creative Screenwriting magazine and rated their “Best Buy.”
(Motion Pictures and Film industry)
May 2009 — November 2009 (7 months)
Wrote episodes on Biblical prophecy for the National Geographic series "Nostradamus Effect."
(Privately Held; Motion Pictures and Film industry)
May 2006 — January 2007 (9 months)
Wrote reenactment scripts, editing scripts, and narration scripts for the entire first season of the Discovery Health series "Mystery E.R."
(Privately Held; Entertainment industry)
August 2005 — October 2005 (3 months)
Wrote and edited scripts for the TLC series "Untold Stories of the E.R."
(Privately Held; Entertainment industry)
June 2004 — August 2004 (3 months)
Wrote episodes of the National Geographic series "Expeditions to the Edge."
(Motion Pictures and Film industry)
October 2002 — May 2004 (1 year 8 months)
Coordinated the writing and post-production on the Discovery Health series "Adoption Stories" and the TLC series "Ultimate 10."
(Privately Held; Entertainment industry)
April 2000 — March 2003 (3 years )
Staff writer on the Discovery Channel series "The FBI Files," "The Prosecutors," "Critical Rescue," and "Diagnosis: Unknown." Wrote the made-for-television movies "Angel of Death," "Fateful Journey," "A Haunting in Georgia," "Cruel Deception," "Deadly Dentist," "The Boneyard," and "Escape from Death Row," featured on The Best of Discovery.
(Public Company; 201-500 employees; Motion Pictures and Film industry)
March 1992 — November 1998 (6 years 9 months)
Synopsized and critiqued screenplays, novels, and treatments for their uniqueness, commerciality, structure, characterization, quality of dialogue and other values. Moderated creative conferences and wrote story notes to producers and screenwriters.
• Recommended and developed the box office smash "Braveheart," "Red Corner," "Hart’s War," and many more.
• Restructured the narrative in "Red Corner" to trim the production budget by $5-million.
(Motion Pictures and Film industry)
1978 — 1979 (1 year )
1971 — 1975
travel photography (travel editor for Malibu magazine), bicycle touring, hot-air ballooning
Academy of Television Arts and Sciences (Production Executive Peer Group)
I.A.T.S.E. Local 700S (Story Analysts)
Filmmakers Alliance
Creative Screenwriting "Best Buy" in Script Analysts
Athens International Film Festival Best Animated Film for "The Orchard Heritage"